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I must say, I quite like the vision of this piece. It's very cute how you portrayed this peaceful scene with two sisters and/or friends...


vision --------------------------- The vision here is pretty good. The drawing is intense and pleasing to the eyes. Although the shadin...


Vision ------------------------ First off, the vision is amazing! It's pleasent to look at and the colors are pleasing to the eyes. Thi...


Vision: Over all the vision is pretty good. The colors go good together and the style is pleasing to the eyes. I guess the only thing t...

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Literature
An Echo for Echo
“Hello!” Yelled the blue-winged creature, Echo into a cave.
“Hello!” the cave replied back, much to the delight of the bat-like creature who suppressed a giggle of delight.
“How are you?” He yelled, jumping into the cave with a large, goofy smile on his face.
“How are you?” Came the reply once again from the cave.
With a large mischievous grin, he moved further into the cave. With a large leap, the creature was airborne, flapping his wings high into the cavern of the cave.
He flew faster, loving the feeling of the breeze blowing gleefully through his fur.
“You’re awesome!” Echo yelled, though struggled through his little bursts of laughter as the cave echoed back the same words.
“Why thank you, I know it’s true.” Echo mused with a prideful smirk as he flew back, allowing the wind to blow playfully through his fur as Echo flew further down underground.
Echo flapped in the air a moment as he
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Literature
No Heart as Large
No nobler dragon has been found
With an egg the color of blood
He hears the sudden call of his friends
And hurries to their side
A bigwing
A brother
A friend
Clay, no other as brave as you
No other as loyal
No heart as large
But torn apart
Told that he has a monster inside
But a monster is dreaded
And not at all this mudwing
For he has the strength of ten dragons
No loyaler dragon can be found
Nore a dragon as sweet
For Clay
The dragon told he was a monster
The dragon told he’s not working harder
The dragonet with an egg the color dragon’s blood
You over came your trials
You made a difference
And became the greatest dragon
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Literature
Queen at Heart [poem]
A rainwing
Seein as a failure
Just because of who she is
And things she cannot change
So she hides behind a wall
She ignores emotions
Not allowing those cutting, killing words to hurt her
Determined to prove her worth
Determined to be the wings of sky
Only to find, that there are some things that can’t be done
But she continues on
Building more walls
Hiding more emotions
But through that
She still finds who she is
Venturing to her tribe
She overcomes the cheating queen
After all, her lineage does not lie
A queen at heart
A queen from the start
Her strength is great
She proved wrong those who hated her
She proved she is someone of worth
That she’s no lazy thing
But rather, a majestic, glorious queen
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Literature
Forever Eternal
Waves crash at the mighty stone cliff
Slowly tearing it down
But the cliff stands strong, even through the relentless beatings
It won’t let simple water let it down
So it just allows the water to push it around
Because it knows that eventually, it will still be around.
It will be around as sand
It will be around limestone
Just maybe not as a cliff
The cliff stands tall
Because it knows
That it will forever be eternal.
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Literature
Perfect Lie [Poem]
A perfect life
Everyone has an image of an ideal life they want
And so does society.
Society puts on pressure onto people to have
It pushes on the people
Squishing them like little vermin
Saying that if you don’t have the “perfect” life
You’re nothing
Saying that if you don’t do everything right
You’re nothing.
Saying if you have even one little flaw,
You are nothing.
But what they say is not true
The perfect life isn’t a life without flaws
That is what is called, the perfect lie.
The perfect life is when you make the most of what you have
When you are able to recognize that bad things happen
When you are able to realize that a good life doesn’t lie within perfection
But rather, lies within ourselves.
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Scorpion Den Icon//Commission
A commission for Blazing-914 ! I hope you like it ^^

Sandwings (c) Tui. T. Sutherland
Art (c) Me
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A Monster by PureSpiritFlower

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I am a 15 year old girl that simply loves to write and draw!
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Hello, guys! So, I've decided to do this little experiment with commissions. Instead of me selling my art, I'm selling my literature. How this works is that you give me a character you want me to write about, the setting where you want them to be in, and their personality.

I just have a few rules with this, so please, please keep these rules if you do decide to buy a slot.

~RULES~
1) Please credit me if you decide to share this story onto other social media sites. 

2) Please realize that I'm willing to haggle with the price. 

3) Be specific in your details.

4) Please fill this out: 
   Character:
   Character personality:
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   Poem or short story?
   First or third person point of view?
  

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short stories
An Echo for Echo“Hello!” Yelled the blue-winged creature, Echo into a cave.
“Hello!” the cave replied back, much to the delight of the bat-like creature who suppressed a giggle of delight.
“How are you?” He yelled, jumping into the cave with a large, goofy smile on his face.
“How are you?” Came the reply once again from the cave.
With a large mischievous grin, he moved further into the cave. With a large leap, the creature was airborne, flapping his wings high into the cavern of the cave.
He flew faster, loving the feeling of the breeze blowing gleefully through his fur.
“You’re awesome!” Echo yelled, though struggled through his little bursts of laughter as the cave echoed back the same words.
“Why thank you, I know it’s true.” Echo mused with a prideful smirk as he flew back, allowing the wind to blow playfully through his fur as Echo flew further down underground.
Echo flapped in the air a moment as he


Poems

No Heart as Large
No nobler dragon has been found
With an egg the color of blood
He hears the sudden call of his friends
And hurries to their side
A bigwing
A brother
A friend
Clay, no other as brave as you
No other as loyal
No heart as large
But torn apart
Told that he has a monster inside
But a monster is dreaded
And not at all this mudwing
For he has the strength of ten dragons
No loyaler dragon can be found
Nore a dragon as sweet
For Clay
The dragon told he was a monster
The dragon told he’s not working harder
The dragonet with an egg the color dragon’s blood
You over came your trials
You made a difference
And became the greatest dragon

Queen at Heart [poem]
A rainwing
Seein as a failure
Just because of who she is
And things she cannot change
So she hides behind a wall
She ignores emotions
Not allowing those cutting, killing words to hurt her
Determined to prove her worth
Determined to be the wings of sky
Only to find, that there are some things that can’t be done
But she continues on
Building more walls
Hiding more emotions
But through that
She still finds who she is
Venturing to her tribe
She overcomes the cheating queen
After all, her lineage does not lie
A queen at heart
A queen from the start
Her strength is great
She proved wrong those who hated her
She proved she is someone of worth
That she’s no lazy thing
But rather, a majestic, glorious queen


Screen Play
A Siblings Betrayal [Screen Play]~DISCLAIMER~
    1) I do not own any of the characters in this script. All characters belong to Erin Hunter.
    2) This is not a cannon Warriors scene. This is something I came up with on own accord.
(Open to a dimly lit alleyway, camera facing upward two stars sparkle overhead. Camera pans downward to see two cats, one is a light silver she-cat with light grey stripe going down her back, and grey speckles under her eyes (Ruby) and walking by her is a black tom with a white muzzle, paw tips, and tail tip (socks). You can see both of the cat’s ribs. They spot a black cat with icy blue eyes, a bone covered collar and a snow white front paw (Tiny/Scourge). Their faces brighten, hope sparkling in their eyes, and they hurry forward toward the black cat.)
Ruby: Tiny! Is that really you? (A large smile on the silver she cat’s face.)
(The pure black cat stops. The camera zooms in onto his face. On his face is a devilish grin, his eyes gleaming evilly. He



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Sorkah Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I touch your Teddybear?
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bobbleheadaubz Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. IT. IS. MINE.
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Sorkah Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
OK OK IT'S YOURS
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DaemonsVenatus Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry, I accidentally commented above. I hid them though, I don't really know how to delete it haha
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bobbleheadaubz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2017
Hiding the comments is how you delete them on DA, more or less. And don't worry, it's okie ^^
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DaemonsVenatus Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okie, :meow:


(thank you for the fav too, I know you said not to thank you but it really means a lot to us)
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